Panel 1:
Sister: Get that little demon out of here!
Panel 2:
Ell: Pardon? Do you mean Coffin?
Sister: Yes! Now get!
Panel 3:
Nith: Alright, what's going on?
Panel 4:
Nith: We've come here for you to train him. Now what kind of problem do you have with my good friend?
Panel 5:
Sister: Um, ya see, well... We can't have his kind running around here. It's--
Nith: His kind?
Panel 6:
Sister: Yes. You see, we can't train a fire mage! Thats all been forbidden for a long time now. So if you all don't mind--
Panel 7:
Ell: No, he's needing to learn the other orders. Why didn't you all try to teach him those?
Panel 8:
Sister: Oh, we tried... Do you all see that school house over there?
Nith: Uh... No.
Sister: Exactly! That's where he "learned" water spells.
Nith: Oh my!
Panel 9:
Sister: It took two more burned down school houses before we had to let him go. He's just untrainable!
Panel 10:
Sister: Tell you what, take him to the city. They'll be able to help someone with his, problem. I'll write ahead to let them know. Just promise to leave now and never return!
Nith: Alright well thanks (interrupted with a door slam)
Nice little twist there, Coffin seems as afraid of her as she is of him though.
>) yes, seems having a fire mage around is quite the liability.
Ooh the new mysterious character looks cool!!! XD
hehe, ty! I literally came up with him one night… around 3am… half asleep… and sketched it out. luckily my sketch and notes were legible… normally, when looking at them in a more well rested and awake state, they tend to look like some kind of Pollock painting. both the sketch and words. XD
though my friends would argue my writing doesn’t improve that much even when awake…
THEN!!!! NOT “THAN” IT’S “I’D RATHER BE ABLE TO SPELL THAN LOOK LIKE A MONKEY” and “I’LL FINISH MY COMIC, THEN I’LL GO TO DYSLEXIC ACADEMY”
I do like the comic, however. 8P
and yes I did catch my own fox paw in seeing the ‘ks’ my bad is pissing on my first bad
heh… yes, I suppose it does look a little odd, but it is supposed to be a “thanks” that got interrupted. though, I don’t doubt there are other spelling and grammatical errors hidden away in my pages… these things just happen sometimes. I try to catch what I can and pass it through another pair of eyes first, but you know, if it’s something you look at long enough, you just don’t see certain things. kinda like that whole “if if” thing where your brain doesn’t process it. either way, I appreciate it when I get constructive feedback, especially in the way of spelling, and tend to fix errors as they occur. I just ask that it remains constructive and respectful, ya know?
tl;dr – “thanks” is fine. I am actually human, so I will make mistakes. at least until I find a way to download my brain into a cylon body… but at that point I’ll probably not make comics anymore and start up my new career in the field of world domination…
… shame on whoever decided to try teaching him in another flammable schoolhouse, rather than either (a) making the next one out of something non-flammable like stone or (b) just trying to teach him somewhere well away from such buildings, that’s what!
sigh, remember the good ol days when school houses were made of asbestos? well, might give you all kinds of cancers, but dang it, them things were fireproof!